Rough Edit 2 Feedback
- Redo most of the shots as many of them lack variety
- Have the camera shot from below, for the loner to get that sense of solitude
- Get a close up of the loner's face
- Get a close up of the loner's
- Have an into for the Bully to show that that character is the Bully
- Have a shot of her shoes/boots walking
- Have a shot of the Bully's mouth, teeth clenched
- Have a shot of the Bully chewing gum
- End it with the characters entering the classroom
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