- Font needs doing
- Filming was blurry for some the shots that come later on in the clip - We need to redo these.
- More variety of shots
- Mise en scene for chess set scene.- match cut of geeks moving chess piece. Move chess pieces closer to the camera. Chess book with the chess geeks.
- Bully needs introduction.
- still images should correspond with actions
- transitions
- Camera angle for loner - show his perspective or looking down on him.
- Mise en scene for drama queen. Her acting matches the role but her clothing does not. Preferably something pink and frilly.
- new shot of classroom. Also other places like classroom board, college hall and
- structural change focusing on classic opening.
- over the shoulder shot of Miraj/new kid looking up at the college.
- Post on classic opening.
This is a picture of some feedback that was given to my group in terms of what needs to be improved in our High School Drama film from looking at our rough edit.
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